First Coloring

the proportions and all is very nice done. she looks very lifelike but the right shoulder is maybe a little too high. the colouring of the cloth is nice done for a first time maybe you could ad a little more contrast between the dark and light parts. I think the hair is missing some colour again more contrast. the eyes ...nice too but very simple. At last I could use some shadows on the right shoulder and in the hair. try to erase the colour that has come outside the lines especially at the flower. hope you could use what I wrote <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> (fist time I wrote a critique) and excuse my bad English if it's bad <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>